A quiet place for my undiscovered poems, thoughts, and pearls of wisdom.
born to catch butterflies on her tongue
She was born to catch butterflies on her tongue.
With shooting stars in her eyes,
she would wait for the rain
to wash the day
out of her hair.
Sitting on a small, dry patch of grass,
she closes her eyes
and waits
anticipating the flutter on her tongue.
As a child
she advised balloons
how to bounce and stretch.
She interrogated hens
until they told her
the truth.
When she tires, she closes her eyes
and shrinks to the size of a pea,
and hides under a maple leaf
in the backyard.
She feels safe there
resting and dreaming
of a world filled
with butterfly wings.
~My starting point~
My name is adrian. My pseudonym is stan laurel. I am from Denver, Colorado, USA. I don't believe that my writing is American just because I am from the USA. My writing reflects me, and if that includes bits of my heritage (being German), then so it does. Otherwise, I write about life.
Unfortunately, poems do not appear out of thin air. It is not as though, at any given time, I am walking around with a beautiful poem floating in my head, and all I have to do is grab pen and paper. Many times, I start with a simple idea, possibly an emotion I am experiencing at the time. This is my foundation. All of my poems are autobiographical. They are created from within. Once I have something important to write about, I can begin. This is where some magic is involved. Although entire poems do not float into my ear, I do experience certain phrases or word combinations that sound pleasing. I write whatever idea, word(s), phrase(s), and/or sentence as quickly as I can in order to capture the entirety of my mind. Finally, I begin to write a poem. I write around the words or phrases I wrote on paper earlier. Many, many, many revisions ensue, and after some time, I am ready to share my poem. It is important to note that (1) writing is a skill that increases with repetition. The more you write, whatever genre, the easier you can express your ideas; and (2), revision is a sometimes never-ending process. It is difficult for me to imagine any of my poems as “complete.” There is a point, however, when you have to let go and see if your poem is going to fly.
~Poetry to me is~
I write because it feels good.
Poetry means so much. It is how I capture my life for others to relate, enjoy, or just read about. It is a way for me to obtain a form of immortality. Poetry is also therapeutic. It allows me to relax and see things with hindsight.
There are too many poets, writers, and other people who have influenced/inspired me. I will try to name a few: Dr. Seuss, Roald Dahl, Sylvia Plath, J.D. Salinger, Joseph Heller, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, William Faulkner, James Joyce, Alice Walker, Henry David Thoreau, Franz Kafka, Lewis Carroll, Lao Tszu, William Shakespeare, Ralph Waldo Emerson, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Edgar Allen Poe, Langston Hughes, Walt Whitman, Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Carl Sandburg, William Carlos Williams, Ezra Pound, Marianne Moore, T.S. Elliot, E.E. Cummings, Ogden Nash, Theodore Roethke, Elizabeth Bishop, Gwendolyn Brooks, Robert Lowell, Richard Wilbur, Allen Ginsberg, W.D. Snodgrass, John Ashbery, Anne Sexton, Richard Howard, Adrienne Rich, and many, many others.
A shower in the summertime
The hot, dry wind
blows against my clean, wet hair.
My shorts stick to the
backs of my wet legs.
A shower in the summertime
makes the dry heat
feel refreshing.
~My Poetic Achievements~
My only poetic achievement is my collection of poetry. I have compiled my poems on my poetry blog and hope to publish a book of poetry some day.
~My Aims in poetry~
My main goal in writing poetry is to please my own mind. I do enjoy sharing my poetry with others and welcome any constructive comments.
~I end over here~
Write! Write! Write! Read! Read! Read!
The Candle's Flame
The candle's flame
flickering in its bowl,
flashes a butterfly's shadow
upon the wall.
Its patterned wings flutter.
The rim of the bowl
curves the butterfly's wings
making an arched span.
Simple in beauty, hovering on the wall,
complex in specifics,
I admire its beauty
until a gust of wind
extinguishes the butterfly's flight
(it's soul rises up, pours into the sky, anddisappears).
Everything else you need to know about me can be found at my personal blog: http://undiscoveredpoems.blogspot.com/
11 Comments:
really like the poem: born to catch butterflies on her tongue
Jeremy :)
9:15 AM
I love the first one best it is beautiful and whimsical
11:18 AM
the first poem is beautiful!!
thanks for doing this interview. :)
6:33 AM
Your Poems are GOOD! Very glad i surfed in. Will definately be visiting often!
3:20 AM
Gulnaz
Sue
Jereny
A big hug for me, to encourage me in interviewing poetry blog...Im really glad that you guys take a time to read this
4:43 AM
Gulnaz
Sue
Jeremy
A big hug for me, to encourage me in interviewing poetry blog...Im really glad that you guys take a time to read this
4:43 AM
Hi Nasra,
Thanks for your kind comments on my poetry.
I would be honored to be add to your blog www.livinginpoetry.blogspot.com
Is it alright that I put links to your poetry as well?
Renee
5:34 AM
Hi Adrian. This is one of your best pieces. (Why the two sites, by the way -- this is the first time I have been to this one).
The opening line is wonderful. The whole piece has a wonderful, elegant whimsy about it. Especially, I love the line "as a child she advised balloons on how to bounce and stretch." That is pure genius!
12:21 PM
Well Adrian has been interviewed by me and since it was special article I asked him to give a special poem which not mentioned in his blog..since many will go to his website
1:50 PM
Nice write up. Somethings I didn't know even though I am a regular at Adrian's blog.
5:40 PM
A
Im glad you able to learn something new about Adrian
1:10 PM
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